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Nelson_MD Admin
Posts : 684 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 29 Location : nowhere
| Subject: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 4:31 pm | |
| Hi, everyone, chapter three is done, and NO, Viraden your guy was not put into it yet. It just wasn't the time. So i hope you all love the new chapter. Now, i am not a professional writer, but please leave your feedback here. | |
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alienboy
Posts : 88 Join date : 2010-07-26 Location : Mars
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:20 pm | |
| It was awesome I like the idea of you poting Ragouls in it | |
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Nelson_MD Admin
Posts : 684 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 29 Location : nowhere
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 7:22 pm | |
| thanks, i don't know what reminded me of it, but really, how could i write about taris and not put the Rakgouls in it... | |
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Darth Viraden
Posts : 320 Join date : 2010-07-26
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 8:22 pm | |
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GinsuMisky
Posts : 483 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 38 Location : Noneya
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:00 pm | |
| one thing real quick Nelson... you do realize TK-421 is from the origial movies... now was that on perpose or did you not know? | |
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GinsuMisky
Posts : 483 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 38 Location : Noneya
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 9:51 pm | |
| Okay so I read the chapter... Nice... I like it... it works... but its repetitive... but I like it alot... Keep it up Nelson... you'll be a hell of a writer yet... | |
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Nelson_MD Admin
Posts : 684 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 29 Location : nowhere
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:22 pm | |
| of course i know that...lol. He was in the first movie, and was a stormtrooper, it was the one Luke posed as. I put that in their deliberately. I am glad you noticed that. It is one of my favorite parts in the movie, and i really don't know why... | |
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GinsuMisky
Posts : 483 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 38 Location : Noneya
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:27 pm | |
| Awesome... Star Wars shout out to someone who was born more then 3000 years after your story like... Dude you really do rock man... | |
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Nelson_MD Admin
Posts : 684 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 29 Location : nowhere
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:31 pm | |
| thanks...that means a lot...lol | |
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GinsuMisky
Posts : 483 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 38 Location : Noneya
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:35 pm | |
| Lol... I bet... I can't wait for chapter 4... | |
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Nelson_MD Admin
Posts : 684 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 29 Location : nowhere
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:36 pm | |
| yeah, I have no idea when i might start writing it... | |
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GinsuMisky
Posts : 483 Join date : 2010-08-18 Age : 38 Location : Noneya
| Subject: Re: Chapter 3 is done Sun Aug 22, 2010 10:43 pm | |
| Its okay we're patiant... | |
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